▶ Your Answer :
In the lecture, the speaker maintains that there are solutions to the
problems suggested in the reading. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s point that relocating reptiles to safer environments is not a viable conservation
tool.
To begin with, he asserts that over-population can be stopped by creating new
habitats. This is because
newly transported creatures do not need to compete for food and space.
This opposes the reading passage’s point that the conservation strategy
can backfire.
On top of that, the lecturer contends that the relocation of reptiles cannot contribute to the spread of the disease if proper measures are taken. The reason is that experts
can establish some shelter in different areas to prevent transfer of pathogens
from nonresistant ones.
This contradicts the reading’s claim that the spread of disease is caused by
relocation of reptiles.
Finally, the speaker argues that reptiles
can survive from being injured and killed while they are being captured. This is because placing some water
in the bottom of buckets prevent trapped animals from dehydration. This refutes the reading’s claim reptiles that remain in the buckets maybe
injured and killed.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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