▶ Your Answer :
(In many groups, the) Leaders play a key role in making a
decision. (to make a decision ). (So,)
There are some important personalities which
are considered necessary to be a leader. Some people argue that those qualities cannot be learned.
(Thus, it is debatable whether people can learn to be a leader.) However, I
personally believe that it is possible to acquire (some) those personalities to be a good leader. (As we) I
think that it is possible to (can) improve those
characteristics by experiencing many things in life. (our personalities such as responsibility and
social skills by a lot of experiences such as sports games or visiting places,
I think that to be learned to be a leader is not impossible.)
To begin with, (we) People can (enhance our) develop a sense of responsibility by participating
(to) in a sports game. There are a lot of
team sports including soccer, baseball, and basketball. In these sports, it is very
important to work in teams in order to win.
(show teamwork between members to get a specific goal.) Therefore, it is important that each member does his or her job. (obvious
that playing their roles should be required to win a game for all members.) For
example, in a baseball game, each player has to hold
and defend his own position in order to win. (we can say that the key
role for each members in baseball team is defending each position which is
allocated for each members.) Consequently, playing
sports helps people to be more responsible, which is necessary to become a good
leader. (it is easy to say that we can improve our responsibility
through playing hard in my position. This will help people who desire to be a
leader in a group.)
In addition, visiting many places
(spaces) helps people improve their social skills.
(would help me to improve my social skills, which is important to leader, as
well.) To be specific, we can meet (diverse) many
different people and talk about various topics. (throughout the
traveling.) People can learn about other
perspectives by listening and interacting with other people. (Then, I
can improve not only various knowledge, but also skills of speaking and
listening to others.) It might also be easier for
people to get along with others. (These two skills might assist me a lot
when I have to lead a group discussing. Also, I can learn how to get along with
new peoples, too.) Therefore, I believe that
visiting other places and meeting with new people can help people learn to be a
good leader. (it is safe to argue that visiting various places and
meeting diverse people could encourage me to be a leader.)
In conclusion, it is
possible to learn some characteristics of a good leader. (we can take
many personalities and values, which is essential to have, by a lot of
experiences. )Therefore, I strongly believe that it
is not something a person is born with, but something that anyone can achieve,
if he or she is willing to learn. (assert that the features of leader
can be gained after birth, rather than claiming that it is a born-gift.)
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Writing
Score (0-30): 15-17
Score
(0-5): 2.25-2.50
Grammar
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