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In this set of issues, both the reading passage and the speaker discuss the problems of human expedition to Mars. To be specific, according to the reading passage, sending human to Mars has several problems, and these could not be solved. However, the speaker contradicts this argument. To begin with, the professor argues that dust in Mars can be controlled. Specifically, sound waves can dislodge dust particles, and dust would be blown away at a high pitch of the sound waves. (How? Explain it more detail) This argument counters the explanation from the reading passage that dust particles which are harmful for human beings hinder astronauts to explore Mars. On top of that, the speaker claims that psychological problems caused by a long trip to Mars would be also manageable. This is because, astronauts would be trained to cope with long isolation from friends and family in advance in the Earth, and Moreover, counseling would be also possible in the mission. To explain, the astronauts can receive help from a computer program, and this includes the counseling session with the expert through recorded video. (Change it in one sentence by indicating counseling session) This claim casts doubt on the reading passage’s insistence that the mission on Mars would be not progressed well by the psychological problems of the astronauts. Finally, the lecturer asserts that financial problems from the expedition could be handled would be also overcame. This is because if many nations pooled resources, they could cover the expenses, and the International Space Station(ISS) is such a good example of this. In addition, the expedition on Mars would give the countries technical advances. This assertion refutes the reading passage’s opinion that financial burden from the expedition is insurmountable predicament to a country. In conclusion, the speaker challenges the explanation from the reading passage on account of the reasons stated above.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | Score | Fair 19-22 | - Writer가 제시한 idea와 contents에서 상세한 과정설명이 필요합니다. specific process를 서술하여 주세요.
- 세번째 이유는 문장이 다소 일관성있게 흘러가 지 않고 있네요. - Integrated essay에서는 결론은 불필요합니다.
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