An intriguing topic of discussion at hand is,
what are good qualities of a parent? The answers of this question can vary
greatly depending on individual perspectives. However, as far as I concerned, I
strongly believe that a parent should have the responsibility for their
families and understand their children’s mind well. In this essay, I will
explore two main reasons to support my opinion.
To begin
with, I think one of the important qualities of a good parents is that they should have responsibility for their
families. This is because children learn the responsibility for their future
family by watching their parent’s actions and mentions. To put in my personal
experience (자신의
경험이 아니라 친구의 경험을 예시로 삼으셨으니 personal이란 단어는 어색합니다), my friend, Min-Ho,
who grown grew up under his grandmother.
When he was seven, his parents was
divorced and his father did not have any mind for him. This situation had a
negative influence on him. After he got married, he did not care for his family
and had a fluently fluent conflicts with his family. Likewise, according to the research
conducted by the Korean National Statistic Office, people who grew by watching
good responsibility of their parents tended to be
have a lower
divorce rate lower the divorce rate and
less family conflict. the conflict in family than the people who they did not. In this sense, I believe
the responsibility of a parent is important because it can greatly influence on
their his or her children.
On top of
that, I believe that a parents should
concentrate on their children’s mentions (말이란 뜻인가요? Words를 사용해 주세요) and actions. This is because
the interest of a parents has a
beneficial effect on forming their children’s characteristics. According to the
professor John Bakker, a famous researcher in a
child-parent interaction, when a parents
concentrates on their children, the children feel stable and
comfortable. It can be helpful for children to form good characteristics and is
directly influenced directly influences on
the sociality of children. This was proven by
the survey conducted by the Ministry of Family. It shows that a child who has
grown with a close interaction with his or her
parents are is
more outstanding than a child who do not have does
not. In this regard, I think one of the parent’s of the most important qualities is the parents’ attraction attention
in their children because it can have a great impact on shaping the
characteristics of their children.
To sum up, I
firmly believe that the responsibility for family and the concentration on
their children are the important qualities for a parents
because these have great impacts on shaping their children’s
responsibility for their future family, and their characteristics.