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Companies that destroy the environment should be taxed.
1. Companies always try to maximize their profit (are cost effective) , so tax will effectively force companies them to become environmentally friendly. 2. Government can collect tax money from them money from tax and use the money them to support the environment. (질문에 벗어나나요?) --> 약간 벗어나는 듯한 점이 있지만 뒷받침 해주는 근거를 어떻게 대냐에 따라 다를 것 같아요. 3. Polluting companies should pay tax. companies are the most polluters so must be taxed. (괜찮나요?)
Companies that destroy the environment should NOT be taxed
1. Tax will hurt prevent small companies from growing advancing as they need to pay a large sum of money. 2. Tax is not the only way to stop the companies to destroy the environment. al destruction by companies, there are other ways too. 3. Many companies will try to avoid tax illegally, so it will create more problems. thus creating greater problems.
감사합니다.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> 간략하게 주제만 써놓으신 거니 채점은 하지 않겠습니다. 문장 시작은 꼭 대문자로 하시고 company 라는 단어를 반복적으로 사용 하시는 것 보다는 corporation 같은 단어로 몇개 대체 하시면 좋을 것 같아요. 수고 하셨습니다. |