There are some people
who believe that in order to succeed, hard work is not a necessity because
there are lots of methods to succeed. However, in my opinion, I personally
disagree with the above idea and I strongly argue that success comes with hard work
for the subsequent reasons. First, hard work makes people competent. Second,
people can be taught learn by doing their
best.
First and foremost,
through hard work, people can be equipped to succeed in their field. This
is because by working enthusiastically, people are able to naturally acquire a
wide variety of skills, which make them competitive. For instance, this is
illustrated by my personal anecdote. When I was
a senior at the university, I led a hectic daily life because I tried to earn a
good score at all my classes and worked as a
teaching assistance assistant at the same
time. At that time, my professor required me to acquire many different job
certificates and to join an internship program instead of listening
to lectures on campus. Additionally, in order to meet requirements for graduation, English language proficency proficiency is also a necessity. I always tended to do
my best when several tasks are were given
to me. As a result, I was awarded the best grade scholarship
as well as got a job upon graduation. Since I was good at speaking English and had
job experience from internship program, I could be was attractive to almost every employers. Come
to think of it, if I had not worked diligently,
I would not have gotten the good position. After that,
I realized that all decicated dedicated efforts
come back to me in a positive way. (영어의 필요성을 너무
갑자기 명시하신 느낌이 있습니다. 이미 충분히 긴 문단에 마무리만 하시면 되는데 영어의 필요성을 쓰셔서
흐름이 루즈해 졌습니다.)
On top of that, based
on hard work, people can acknowledge valuable lessons,
which led would lead them to success.
Generally speaking, people working who work
hard experience trials and errors. Sometimes, they can feel rewarding from hard
work, but they can also meet a serious of failure. At the basis
of these experience, people will finally be able to find the best
ways to do some tasks successfully. There are was
a poll conducted by the National Association of Business with influential
businessman and businesswoman as respondents.
The purpose of the survey was to understand what draw drew them to success. A successful CEO at an automobile company stated that he judges whether to
take a risk by his know-how which had was
accumulated by experience. He added that when he opened a business related to
circulation at first, although he did his best, the business went bankrupt. But, he attempted to
figure out why his business failed and stayed up all night. He stressed that
continuous questions and efforts gave him insight. Another famous investor
mentioned that even if hard work does not provide you with conspicuous success,
it will finally allow you to make a fortune someday
time.
To sum up, success always needs as much endeavor as what people
expected by considering the advantage of hard work: making people skillful and
giving expertise. In this regard, success comes from not free of charge but through precious efforts.