▶ Your Answer :
Although
there is no complete consensus that has been reached on the topic, I strongly believe that a
class based on discussions is better than solely listening to the lectures. This is because students can
learn (significant amount of) new ideas from other students and it
will improve their communication skills. (how
to speak well.)
To begin with, students learn a lot
from other students. Having a discussion allows
students to share different kinds of
ideas. Thus, students can learn about things that they did not know
before or things that were not covered in the
lecture. ( about the new knowledge that does not mentioned in the
lecture.) For example, when I was in high
school, my English teacher let us discuss the
topics given by the teacher. (English class usually proceeded in a
discussion way.) I learned about the culture
of America and how to use English in a daily conversation from my friend who
once lived there. (at the America.) Moreover, since just listening to a lecture is not impressive,
students tend to forget about the lecture easily. (it is not impressed
memory to listen the lecture. Hence, students easily forget about the lecture.)
On top of that, students can learn to
communicate with others. (are more fluent on speaking.) By having a discussion,
it encourages students to be more sociable.
(introvert more likely to change into extrovert.) It
helps students to express more about themselves and their thoughts. (Students
who are timid changes by having conversation and express his feeling to others.)
As a result, they become more talkative than
before. Numerous studies have found that actively
engaging in class discussions helps students to become more confident. (in
Seoul-university have shown that students, doing discussion,are more fluent on
speech and more likely to hang out with friends.) It
also helps develop oral presentation skills. (Having discussion improves
the ability to have eloquent speech by talking, preparing and memorizing the
article.) Seoul National University conducted an
experiment on job interviews. The students who participated were required to
write a resume and do a job interview. Some of the students who participated in
class discussions did well on the interview. (had test to hire the
students. Test proceeded by having an interview. When students take the test,
interviewers look at the self-introduction paper. Naturally,students who wrote
that he or she did more discussion was greater in speaking than who just listen
the lecture.)
To sum up, classes
with open discussions are more beneficial for students. (learns a lot
from others and better performs speech.) In this regard, I prefer to have
discussions rather than listening to the lecture.
Writing
Score (0-30): 17-18
Score
(0-5): 2.50-2.75
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