▶ Your Answer :
Undoubtedly, using the internet
plays a significant role in people's lives in many places where they work or
play. There must be many effects that the rise of internet give
has given to people in the aspect of access
to various informations. If I had to
choose the most influential thing, I would say that the improving
people's work performance is the most important.
There are several reasons as follows.
To begin with, the availability of internet helps people developing to
develop their work performance. It gives them a chance to find a
information more quickly and accurately, whenever they want. By knowing that
information, they are likely to accomplish their work effectively. For example,
many research teams, including Seoul National University, analyzed two groups
of young adults. Both of that groups were
composed of youngsters who started learning
making ships. However, the first group consisted of those who learned through
using 3D informations information on in
the internet, and the other group is was made
up of those who had studied only with textbooks in the past. The reasercher
researchers found that the former group needed 6
less years than the latter group to be knowledgeable
enough to design one's own ship. In
particular, the first group not only got information quickly, but also had
more precise knowledge than the second
group. This implies that the knowledge in
the internet is beneficial for people's ability to do their tasks. If people
had lived without the internet, they would have not been
able to build this civilized society in such a short time.
All things considered, I strongly believe that the internet greatly
affects to the effectness productivity and efficiency of today's people for the
reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, the importance of the internet
should not be underestimated.
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