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Some people might think that grading system in education is necessary because it gives a criteria to evaluate the student competence they have. In my opinion, however, this is not always the case. Following essay will argue that providing grades to students is not always beneficial for several reasons. First of all, the grading system cause a lot of stress to the students. That is, students tend to avoid studying hard in onerous courses or subjects because they worried about getting lower grade in the subjects. There are many important courses to learn for the students even though the contents are difficult to understand and follow. However, due to the anxiety of getting bad score in the area, they easily give up to try to study hard. For example, when I was a first grade in college, physics were too much difficult for me to study and eventually got failed to the subject. The result wasn't surprised for me because I paid less time and effort in studying the subject. But after 2 years later, eventually the experience turned back on me when I realized that physics was one of the most essential subject to be learned for my post career. At the time, I regretted a lot what i've done in the first year in college. If I haven't got a suppression about getting good score in every subject, I would have not gave up so easily like that and might have got a better result. On top of that, this grading system can eclipse the importance of other vital subject. There are a lot of matters than can't be measured in simple grade such like integrity, perseverance or collaboration ability. Majority of students are missing these kind of thinks due to making concentration only to raising grades. According to a survey held in Seoul University in Korea at 2015, people who were trying to get admission for the college had magnificent score on their SAT. However, the researcher also found that even though they were deft on examination, they lack of other social related competence such as collaboration because they didn't have much time to spend in that field. The researcher actually said that they need additional system which can evaluate a interior factor that influence their personalities or characteristics. The survey tells us that focusing only to the apparent score can risk other vital factors to be ignored. To sum up, grading system can cause a lot of stress to the students and leave open possibilities that other important factors can be eclipsed. In these regard, providing student with grade system isn't always beneficial to promote learning competence.
첨삭도 첨삭이지만 혹시 이정도면 몇점 정도 맞는지 가능하다면 같이 가늠해주시면 감사하겠습니다. 제가 계속 라이팅 연습한다고 하는데 점수가 안올라서 뭐가 문제인지 모르겠어서 분석좀 해보려고 합니다. (계속 이런식으로 써 왔는데 대부분 19 ~ 22 사이더라구요...ㅠ)
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