▶ Your Answer :
Educating
children as they grow up is the most important duty for parents. But there are
some disagreements about the method. Some parents may argue that helping them
to study is the most important thing. Others may think that playing games or
sports with their children is better. There is no right answer, but I think
devoting more time on entertaining can have greater effect on the children.
First, playing
with children can help them develop mental physical health. Physically,
children can frequently move while they play sports with their parents which
help them be healthier. This can lead to mental strength. Big movements which
are frequently involved in sports can help children relieve stress they get
from hard school work. This is proved in a research by a group of scientists in
University of Chicago. They classified a group of elementary school students
into two groups using survey which ask them if they frequently play sports with
their parents. Then they checked their physical strength and mental health.
They found out that playing with children can give great impact on both their
physical and mental health.
The other reason
is that playing with children can make stronger relationship between children
and their parents. Being involved in family activities such as playing sports
or games can make children feel the sense of belonging. They can also feel that
other family members are really loving them. This sense of bond can result in
success in life regardless of the field. As they live, they might confront
several overwhelming problems. In those times, there is greater chance that
children with stronger mental base that is strengthen by close relationship
with parents overcome those problems. In a survey done by a group of researchers
from Korea Social Study Institute, when people come across problems in their
lives, they often get relief from precious memories of playing with their
parents.
To
conclude, playing with children by doing activities together can benefit
children both physically and mentally. This will also strengthen their
relationship with their parents and consequently help them succeed in the
future.
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