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Undoubtedly, helping community plays a
significant role in people’s daily lives in many of the places where they work
or play. Some people might think that today’s young people are not willing to
help their community, while others do not. Both sides may have their own
reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that
today’s young people tend to help their community. There are several reasons as
follows.
On top of that, young people are willing
to give a hand to their community, because they can broaden their perspectives.
As modern society is becoming globalized and diversified, today’s job companies
require candidates with such professionalism working with people from different
backgrounds, different conditions. Improving such skills cannot learn from
textbook or in class, which means young people should have first-hand
experience. To acquire a stable occupation, today’s young people are willing to
improve their abilities by aiding directly their community. For example, when I
was in high school, I saw one of my classmates was a blind. I felt very uncomfortable
because it was my first time seeing someone like that. I kept my distance from
him and sometimes made fun of him. However, I had noticed that being a
specialist in a developing country requires me abilities to work with people
from different countries, different conditions. Fortunately, I had a chance for
assisting the blind in my village by leading them to an exhibition and cleaning
their room on summer vacation. I realized that we had a lot in common in a way
that we all cared about our family and friends, were committed to relationships,
and got easily hurt by what others say. Thanks to this experience, I was able
to get a job as an educational specialist in Japan-Cambodia International
Cooperation Agency by keeping in touch with them. Without this experience, I
would not have been able to get a job in global market.
All things considered, I strongly believe
that today’s young people are tending to help their community for those reasons
I have mentioned above. All in all, this trend will continue and pass down to the
next generation.
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