▶ Your Answer : Some people think that they prefer postpone assignment until close to the deadline. However in my opinion, it is better to work right away than postpone until close to the deadline. There are two reasons. First, it helps me feel comfortable by finishing it early. Second, a person who gave me assignments can have more time. ^ First of all, wWorking on assignments right away helps me feel comfortable. If I make up assignments right away when I get it, I will not get stressed. This is because I do not have to feel pressure from the deadline. For example, in my case, when I took a writing class in my university, my professor gave me lots of assignments every week. So I did those at the end of the week, Sunday midnight. I had a busy day and got extremely stressed every Sunday because of the assignments and I could not have any time for myself. One day, I was doing my homework at as the same day;, however, I could not cover all the contents because I had started my homework too late. Thus, I barely submitted it on the class website at Sunday midnight and even it was not completed. Through this harsh experience, I decided to finish all of the assignments immediately and I made it up. Consequently, from the time, I usually work on assignments right away and I do not get pain from the deadline anymore. ^ On top of that, The professors can control their time more freely. When I hand in the assignments right away, they can grade fastly and have more time for themselves. In the world we live in, time is gold. And it is really important for professors to have enough time to grade. To be more specific, all the professors have lots of works and they always feel short of time. For these reasons, it could be a big help if we submit our assignments early. Moreover, by working the assignments right away, they will be able to give scores more correctly and give advice for us. For example, I have an experience as a Korean teacher for my school exchange students. I gave my students homework once a week. And one of my students from France always worked on it right away so I could grade more clearly and sometimes I gave her some advice for her Korean skills. In the result, after the semester, she told said me that it was a big adavantage in her Korean skills and she could improve her language level. ^ To sum up, I prefer working on my assignments right away than postpone it until close to deadline because it helps me feel comfortable and I can get advice by giving enough time to professors.
Good (24–30) 첫번째 본문 -대소문자 오류 -중간에 extremely stressed or an extreme stress 로 바꿔주세요. -however 로 문장 이을 수 없습니다. 문장; however, 문장 으로 써주세요.
두번째 본문 -주장과 연결되는 디테일한 설명들 넣어주시면 본인의 주장의 설득력이 조금더 올라갈 수 있습니다. -누가 누구에게 말할때는 주로 say동사 아니고 tell동사 씁니다.
전체적으로 내용 괜찮습니다.
수고하셨습니다~
|