▶ Your Answer : There might be some people who believe that
students would receive better education if they were required to attend classes
for 11months. However, I personally disagree with the idea above for two
subsequent reasons. First, students will be stressed out by attending classes
for 11months. Second, it will make worse relationship with their family.
First of all, attending classes for
11months makes students stressful. They don’t have time to relieve stress. People
nowadays are living a busy and hectic life, so they are under great stress, but
a lot of them don’t even realize they are stressed out. Stress is known to be a
major factor that keeps us from being healthy. A few days ago, I read an
article posted online by KBS as to a survey that is related to this topic. Of
the more than 300 journalists surveyed in Korea, about 80 percent of them
believe that people need time to take a rest. The majority of the respondents
added that the reason lies in the fact that people can concentrate on their
work when they have enough time to relieve stress.
Second, relationship with students’ family
will be worse. This is because they don’t have time with their family. These
days, people tend to overlook the importance of family, because we usually
spend too much time working or studying. People need to take a break and look
back why we’re working or studying in the first place. People go through all
these hardships to make their families happier. I will provide an example of my
friend, Kevin, whom I have known since elementary school. He used to spend time
to study because he thought that academic courses are the most important thing.
But one day he decided to spend time with their family. This decision changed
his life better because by spending time with his family he thought that it is
real happy life.
In conclusion, attending classes for
11months make not only students stressful but also worse relationship with
their family. In this regard, students would not receive better education if
they were required to attend classes for 11months. |