▶ Your Answer : Some people argue that children should play sports for competition not for fun. However, I have a different idea. I think that it is better for students to enjoy sports not to compete with others.
First of all, if students play sports game for competition, they will be very stressed out. To be specific, nowadays students live in a competitive world. This is because, They always compete with other students to get for getting a good grade, so they study until late at night every day. This is why students really need some time to refresh themselves by such as playing soccer with their friends. Playing sports for fun not for competition is possible allows them to relieve their stress and forget about all the academic pressure. worries coming from study. There is an example supporting this idea. My nephew, who is 11 years old, is an elementary school student in South Korea. Recently, I had a chance to hear about his daily schedule from his mother. Until then, I did not know that he usually comes home around ten at night. During the weekdays, he takes several private lessons after school, such as English, Chinese, and piano. attends a private educational center after his school for English and Chinese lessons, and he also takes piano lessons from another place. His mother said that his schedule is nothing but ordinary compared to other children. a very typical one compared to others.
Also, when students play sports for fun, they can make lots of new friends. In other words, it is a good chance to get to know people with the same interest, so they are able to socialize with others and build a stronger relationship with their friends. If they compete with others for gaining a victory, they will not make lots of friends. This is because by when competing with another the other team, the losing team will feel bad in the end, so they won't get along well after the game. they do not mix well each others and loser team might feel bad. However, when they play sports for fun, they can easily socialize with others, regardless of the outcome of the game. teams. Take my personal experience for example. When I was a high school students, in my school, there was a field day annually. In my class, no one was good at any sports, there was no one who was good at exercise, so we decided to just enjoy the event. We won a victory in only one games and lost the other games, but we were happy. This is because we were not trying to win. very competitive, So we can could build a good relationship with our team and other teams with out without anyone feeling bad. hurting others.
To sum up, I suggest students should play sports games for fun not for competition, because if they do so, they would be able to make lots of friends and relieve their stress.
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