▶ Your Answer :
People’s intellectual, social and personal
development are highly influenced by having broad knowledge. With this
understanding, I believe that it is better for people to have broad knowledge of
many academic subjects rather than to specialize in one specific subjects. This
is because having broad knowledge of various academic subjects enables people
to strengthen interpersonal skills and enjoy a better quality of life in terms
of job opportunities.
Firstly,
having broad academic knowledge makes people to strengthen interpersonal skills.
Understanding the daily social environment of the people and the potential role
of the various range of academic knowledge is necessary to substantiate this
view. For instance, I engaged in a variety academic studies during my
university. In addition to my major, I was interested in studying diverse
academic areas such as music and history. This was extremely useful in helping
me to build interpersonal skills for later years in society. In one situation,
I joyfully continued talking with my clients who had majored in music after
meeting. Also, my bosses were pleased to listen to my opinions on current subjects
related to music that were on news. I realized that various knowledge sometimes
stimulates topic of conversation and broaden consensus with other people, which
result in maintaining better quality of conversation. In this regard, I argue
that having broad academic knowledge allows people to improve interpersonal
skills.
Secondly,
having broad academic knowledge makes people to enjoy a better quality of life
in terms of job opportunities. Interestingly, a renowned social scientist in
South Korea published an article in “The Korean Herald” last Tuesday which
claims that having a lot of knowledge of various academic areas enables people
to strengthen competitiveness in society. The article added claims that 84
percent of 200 Korean leading recruiters prefer people who have various
knowledge of academic subjects. The recruiters show a such tendency because
they tend to be more creative and analytical. In the long run, creativity and
analytical thinking enhance work performance. This is because people cannot
only create outstanding achievement by combining working tasks with various
knowledge of academic areas but also find solutions of working problems through
various perspectives, which result in job promotion and ultimately help people
to enjoy a better quality of life in terms of working environment. I thought of
this report because the result of the survey resonated with my thoughts.
To
sum up, I believe that having broad knowledge of academic areas is better than specializing
in one specific areas for the following reasons: strengthening interpersonal
skills and enjoying a better quality of life in terms of job opportunities.
Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the
reasons I have mentioned above.
질문이 있습니다!
토픽에서는 한 가지 분야에 특화되어 있는 것 보다는 여러 학문 분야에서 폭 넓은 지식을 갖는 것에 동의하냐는
뜻인데, 이렇게 비교하는 topic에서는 각 body마다 비교문장을 꼭 써야 하는 것인지 궁금합니다.
위 에세이를 작성할 때 30분 시간을 정해서 작성하느라 시간에 쫓겨서
비교하는 문장을 넣지 못했습니다. 만약 실제 시험이라면 이렇게 비교를 하는 토픽에서는 반드시 각 body 마다 내가 선택한 부분과 하지 않은 부분에 대한 비교문장을 넣지않으면 감점 요인이 될까요?
감사합니다!
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