▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage's point, there are several advantages to raise a special tax on tobacco products sold in the country. On the contrary, in the lecture, the speaker contends that the claims in the reading are not viable. This casts doubts on the (각 분야가 말하는 공통주제 소개 이후 입장이 어떻게 차이가 있는지에 대해 설명해주세요) To begin with, the lecturer states that it could not deter young people to buy the products. According to a survey, there is a black market where the young can easily smuggle the products. This is contradictory to the reading's claim that young people are less likely to buy cigarettes with the taxation because young people are short on cash.
In addition, the speaker maintains that the benefit is not sufficient to repair environments. What this means is that the decrease in the tobacco can cause the total amount of taxation to be decreased. This view is in direct opposition to the reading passage's assertion that the overall tax would be enough to restore damaged ecosystem.
Lastly, the lecturer asserts that it could not alleviate poverty. This is because those tobacco products are taking in charge of a lot of jobs. As a result, several jobs would disappear and the situation would be worse than ever. This refutes the reading's insistence that government would give people assistance through the funds gotten by the tax.
riting 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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- 지금 작성된 분량보다 lecture detail 이 조금 더 보충되어야 합니다. (2nd paragraph는 작성된 내용으로는 양측의 입장이 분명히 전달되었다고 보기 어렵습니다) |