Some people may asserts that speaking is the (최상급 the) most important language skill comparing to reading, listening and writing. However, I have a different opinion. When It comes to the statements that the ability to speak well is more important than the ability to write well, I strongly disagree. There are two reasons why I feel in this way.
To begin with, I believe that writing is more important than speaking because writing is the most fundamental tool of academic learning. To be specific, writing is a very basic skill that improve our understanding on learning knowledge (배우는 지식에 대한 이해도에 도움이 되는 것이지 본인의 지식을 개발하는 것이라고 보기 어려움) or enables us to share our ideas with others. For example, if there would have been no writing in the world, we cannot learn anything because it is impossible to build up our ancestor's knowledge to the books. Moreover, many scientific research says that writing makes people more creative and inventive. For those reasons, I think that writing is more important than speaking, especially in academic setting. --> 예시가 전혀 구체적이지 않으며 가정 형태로 작성되어 있습니다. 사실에 기반한 통계/역사적 증거/개인의 경험 (어떻게 writing 을 통해 speaking보다 더 배움의 깊이를 더했는지) 을 나열해야 합니다.
On top of that, I think that writing is more useful than speaking in contemporary society. In my opinion, people of these days write more than they were used to. This is because there are lots of writing-based services like social media, e-mail, and text messages that we use every everyday. For example, I noticed that lots of my university friends write at least 2 or 3 articles on their social media. Each article is about 300 letters, so the amount of the letter they write is about 600 ~ 900 words in a day and about 30,000 letters in a month, which is a quite big number when every words are accumulated. Moreover, most people use free text message on a daily basis. (주제와의 관련성이 있다고 보기엔 설명이 부족한 문장입니다) It is safe to say that writing is more important than speaking because many people write more than speaking. (main reason을 "writing이 more useful한 이유는 다양한 기술 발전으로 인해 사회가 text중심으로 흘러가고 있기 때문이다" 로 재구성한 뒤 social media등에 대해 소개해주세요. )
In conclusion, I certainly think that writing is more important than speaking because writing is helpful for creativity and people cannot learn anything without writing. (이 이유가 정확히 본문에서 제시되었는지 확인하고 부연 설명을 충분히 했는지 검토해주세요)Also, writing is more useful in contemporary society because there is lots of writing based services.
riting 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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FAIR-LIMITED
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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FAIR
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LIMITED
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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