▶ Your Answer :
The lecture claims that the reading's
assertion does not have validity for explaining "quackers". This
contradicts the reading's assertion that the sound was caused from possible
three theories.
The first point made in the passage is that
orcas made the sound by mating near the water surface. The lecture, however,
challenges this paricular theory by arguing that the theory does not convince
people. Since the whales do not mate near the water surface, instead of mating
on the top, they mate at the deep sea, under 200^meters. Therefore, the Russian
submarines cannot hear their mating sounds.
Another point that the article put an
emphasis on is, that the giant squid makes the sound and they are invisible
because of their lack of skeletons in the body. In contrast, the lecturer
contends that the theory which giant squid makes the sound is false. He further
states that the squids still exist in the same ocean. If the sound is caused by
the squids, people must hear that sound so far now. Yet, the sound is
disappeared. This proves that the reading’s theory is wrong.
Finally, it is stated in the reading that
in the Cold War period, the United States’ submarines should have made the
sound to interrupt them. On the contrary, it is highlighted in the lecture that
the noise and size of submarines could be detected by Russian submarines. He gives
details that the US could not make an invisible submarines. They did not have
enough technology. The Russian could have detected the US submarines, if the US
did. Hence, the last theory also cannot be accepted.
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