Throughout
the history, several factors have been influencing the society, in the
aspects of culture, food and means of transportation. Technological
developments made those which weren’t possible in the past become
available. For example, in the ancient times,
the fastest transportation system was riding horses,
but now we can go to another continent in just a day by airplanes. Also,
instead of walking hundreds of kilometers, we can use cars and move to another
city far away in less than a couple of hours.
So, these are both great inventions. But, comparing these two transportations,
I think airplanes gave a greater impact on
society than cars for two reasons. (서론이 매우 논리적이고 잘 쓰셨지만 독립형을 쓰실 때 이렇게 길게 쓰실 필요는 없으십니다. 차라리 서론을 짧고 간략하게 쓰시고 본론에 더 근거를 적어주시는 게 효율적이에요.)
First,
we need to think about the impact on communications between societies. People
communicated with those far away through horses and boats, but this was very
limited in coverage compared to what people are doing nowadays. They We fly to another country overseas and do economic
activities and talk about urgent issues in politics. Of course, cars contributed
in broadening the coverage of activities, but it didn’t give that much of an impact when compared to what airplanes did.
Airplanes made a modification in the concept of communication by decreasing the
amount of time people use to go across the ocean.
Second,
airplanes gave a great change in those societies
where it is hard to transport by cars. In places where there are so many
mountains and lakes and relatively small populations
is living, it is inefficient to make roads considering the small demands
of it. In these places, airplanes are more
appropriate than cars. This is because airplanes can be used depending on the
demand. It is more effective in the use of time too.
In conclusion, I think that airplanes have made a
greater influence on society than cars. This is because airplanes made people
go to another country with smaller amount of time and it’s more effective in
places where there are many obstacles.