▶ Your Answer : Some people think that universities should spend much money on libraries than on sports. However, in my opinion, sports activities also is important to university students. This is because sports are good for the body and stimulate social interaction among students. To begin with, sports activities play an important role in promoting student's physical health. Through Throung the sports game, they can obtain good body and mind which help to concentrate on their studies stuidies. It is very important. If they have lots of stress, they cannot can't study each subject efficiently. For example, I enjoyed playing a golf when I was a university students. So I could obtain good health. On top of that, sports activities improve social interation among students. This is because sport group, such as soccer, baseball and so on, require collective effort and cooperation. Student can learn how to communicate and cooperate with each other. In my case, I enjoyed unvierity's tennis club and learnd some skills about cooperation. To sum up, it is important to invest sports activities as well as libraries in University.
Limited (1-16) 글자 수 300자 미만입니다. 미니멈 300자 채우지 못하면 감점됩니다.
서론 -같은 문단에서 줄바꿈하지 않습니다.
첫번째 본문 -철자 오류 through -can 뒤에 메인 동사 필요. 문맥상 obtain, acquire 이 적절합니다. -철자 오류 studies -축약형 지양해주세요. can't-->cannot -playing golf -a university student 단수이므로 students-->student -같은 문단에서 줄바꿈하지 않습니다.
두번째 본문 -철자 오류 social -cooperate with -같은 문단에서 줄바꿈하지 않습니다. 개선하시고 연습하실 부분이 많습니다.
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