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Some people think that the first mission that it is more
valuable for teachers to build building
an intimate relationship between the teacher with them and their students than giving a lot of knowledge
in their fields. Whereas, others have a different idea. They believe that the
most crucial role of the teacher is offering knowledge in their field, since students who have an eager in there are eager to study are prefer the teachers who are
could give more many information. Also, the teacher can impact on
the student's habit for work.
First of all, students who especially have interested in their
class are needs desire and need better-qualified
knowledge. It is the a fact that the
enabling students to satisfy their intellectual curiosity is teacher's
mandatory, that it
is a mandatory task for teachers to satisfy their students’ intellectual
curiosity, so focusing on conveying the information is a better approach than
just to keep an intimate relationship with each other. For example, when I was high school,
there were two math teachers. One teacher was
who preferred to build a strong connection with their his students rather than teaching well. On the other
hand, the others concentrated on teaching his subject and not on building intimate
relationships with students. on specify field even not closed with
students. Not only did most students respected
the latter teachers as the more skilled
teacher but also the school gave more incentive to
him too.
Secondly, teachers' attitude toward the work could directly have an
influence on classes. Ordinary, most of the students followed the habit which
is gained from their advisors or parents with during
growth. If teachers did not devote to their work, the student would have a
tendency that making to make less effort
on their work. For instance, According to a
research done by Korea University which observed two different
classes, a couple of classes had different two approaches by Korean
University, the students in classes with a comfortable atmosphere had a
relatively lower sense of responsibility compared to students who are were required to concentrate on their studies.
However, the latter group showed a higher academic achievement by
around 60% more. Since the teacher has the duty to teach students
correctly, they have to focus more on the message and work they should deliver
rather than the atmosphere of the class.
To sum up, a teacher's priority is providing
to provide professional knowledge to their
students who are want to learn more deeply, also affected by their
teachers. In this regard, I agree with that the
teacher's important role is concentrating to provide a knowledge related to
specific fields rather than keeping to keep a the close relationship with their
students.
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