There are some disagreements over whether or not young people today have a tendency to be less dependent on their
parents than in the past. Some people believe
that today's people rely more on their parents than the past. My view,
however, is that parents support their children in the current society more
than the traditional past society.
This is because the sophisticated technology helps has made it unnecessary for young people to be
unnecessary to depend on their parents. Moreover, there is less time to
spend with their parents. (밑줄 친 문장은 지금 사회의 젊은이들이 옛날에 비해서 부모님의 도움을 더 받는다고 적으셨는데, 그
이후 문장들은 그 반대 입장을 옹호합니다.)
To begin with, the advanced science can provide young people the
opportunity to deviate from the dependence of
on their parents in the modern society. In the
modern society, personal problems has been
are complicated because of the exorbitant
information that a person is are too difficult
to handle. Thus, people tend to depend on the developed technology, especially
the Internet. The Internet plays a significant role on making people solve
their problem independently. According to the study conducted by a team at
Korea University, more than two-three thirds
of surveyed students mentioned that they preferred mainly to solve their issues
throughout the Internet. This was because there was a wide range of
information which could act as great help when they accessed to the Internet.
Also, they could resolve their problem quickly with flexible time and the unlimited space of the Internet. As a result, the
aspects allowed young people to be less dependent on their parents.
In addition, it is hard for young people to spend time
with their parents. By increasing the increase
in the population and improving the improvement
of the level of education, the competence becomes far much
grave has become more crucial in the modern
society. Thus, most of students should spend a lot of time at their
school or acadimic academies to be
successful, which means that they learn mainly pragmatic knowledge from their
teacher instead of their parents. The time would make young people seek the
help from not their parents but their teacher. For instance, when I was in high
school, I spent most of time at my high school because I wanted to go to a
university. When I wondered how a math problem
was solved, I hesitated to seek the help from my parents since my parents
worked and I went to high school. Therefore, the
only one way to solve the problem was to solicit the help from my
teacher.
To summarize, the improved
technology is useful for today's young people to solve their
problems independently, and moreover there is less time to spend with
their parents. Considering the above two reasons, it is evident that the
independence of young people in the modern society is more strengthened.