■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : 문제를 해결할 때 개인의 지식과 경험에 의지하는 것이 좋을지 혹은 다른 사람들의 조언을 구하는 것이 좋을지 |
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Some people believe that depending on other experience is better to solve the problem than using own's way. However, I have a different idea of it. I think that it is more efficient that solve a problem by themselves. Firstly, they can find more suitable methods consider the their environment. using own knowledge can help people to solve a problem more appropriately considering own's environment. Secondly, they can solve a problem in relatively short time than when getting an advice from others.
To begin with, by depending own's experience, They can find a solution to the problem that is more suitable for themselves. Since the ability to solve a problem is various depending on the individual, sometimes the situation that other's advice could not be adjusted to them could occur. For example, when I was the high school, I collected a lot of information about health from the close people. they shared me with many tips based on theory in the textbook. However, their training program was not suited to my exercise ability because they did not concern my meal plan and my physical fitness. Eventually, I focused on organizing the experiences I had when I worked out myself and I succeeded in losing weight.
On top of that, they can save their time to resolve a problem. Too much information often impede people to make a right decision. because it requires an additional time to judge whether it is appropriate for them or not. However, by sticking to their own memory, they can exploit time more efficiently by using the way which they used to. For instance, according to research from the University of Maryland, the results were very intriguing, after the compared couple of group who had different habits when they solve a problem, the people who use own's experience showed 80% higher in time management on the same task requiring decision-making.
To sum up, by utilizing own's experience, they can find an appropriate way to them also save their time. In this regard, I agree with the using their own knowledge to resolve the problem is better than obtain an advice.