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The reading
passage contends that there are some plausible reasons why whale’s stranding
happens, while the lecturer brings about several points that contradict this argument. --> RC/LC각 파트 입장을 꼭 제시해주세요.
First
all of, the speaker argues that stranding by wind patterns is inaccurate. This
is because whale’s stranding can occur in
places where a variety of wind patterns appear. For example, the whales
sometimes come along the eastern
coast of which wind flows away from the
land. If wind pattern is one of the reasons, it should not take place like this
area. This casts doubt on the reading which states that whales may get stranded
due to wind patterns.
According to the
lecturer, whales coming ashore due to illness is not a trustworthy assertion. To be specific, even healthy wales can be stranded as well. Moreover, they can go back to
sea by themselves through their power regardless of disease. This refutes the
reading passage’s assertions that whales are coming ashore owing to sickness.
The
final point made by the lecturer, the geological features of specific shoreline, rarely give rise to confused whales. To be specific, if a gentle slope makes
a problem to navigate, all the whales would lose their way rather than some
whales would. This counters the
writer’s claim that the geological features of certain coastlines may result in
whales to get disoriented.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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GOOD
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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