▶ Topic :
The reading passage argues that there are a number of benefits that can be obtained through the use of uniforms in school. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict the argument. First of all, the lecturer points that wearing uniforms in school cannot keep kids safer and does not reduce instances of crime. This is attributed to the fact that the number of fighting is increased about two times in Florida. This refutes the point of the reading passage that reductions in across all types of criminal activities was due to the fact that kids wear school uniforms. Moreover, in the lecture, the point made by the reading on the great team spirit and unity cannot be created from the same outfit. It is obvious that the uniforms remove personality from students. This casts doubt on the idea in the reading passage that students engage more in a great level of participation when they wear uniforms. Final point made by the lecturer is that not all students wear the same cloths while doing school activities. Six percent of wealthy people wear a quality of uniform. However, the lower quality cloths were worn by students who lived in marginally located area.
Writing 0–30 score scale: Limited (1-16) / Fair (17-23) / Good (24–30)
ADDRESSING TOPIC
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ORGANIZATION
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PROGRESSION AND COHERENCE
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LANGUAGE USE
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GRAMMAR
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GOOD
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GOOD
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FAIR
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FAIR
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FAIR
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각 카테고리별 SCORE: LIMITED / FAIR / GOOD
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