■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.
Hackers_Actural test Writing_2nd edition_test02 입니다! In the listening, the lecturer casts doubt
on the reading’s argument that there are three plausible theories theoires to explain
the transient lunar phenomenan. He maintains that this reading’s claim is
somewhat erroneous, less convincing, and quite invalid, saying that no one can
be positive with whith this assumption in the reading passage.
First of all, the reading insists that this
is due to the gases beneath the surface of the Moo. However, the professor,
refutes that argument by stating that gases are unlikely responsible to TLPs.
This is mainly because gases usually noticed so this is just conicidence. ^ The
second point, the author makes is that paticles from space strike the Moon’s
surface and result in TLPs. To rebute this claim, the speaker asserts that dusk
cloud is huge but it is never detected. It means, particles from space are not
main cause. Moreover, there are a little dusk floating around., ^ Finally, the
author contends this this phenomenan is mainly because of the solar radiation.
In contrast, the speaker disputes the claim by saying that data of solar flare
is not perfectly matched with TLPs. To be more specific, sometimes it is
matched up but more often it did not didn’t.
Therefore, the lecturer concludes that the
theories suggested by the author are too proposterous to get legitimacy.
한가지만 더 여쭤봐도 되나요ㅜㅜ 혼자공부하고있는 학생이라ㅠㅠ
통합형 작성시, 보기에 주어진 글을 그대로 적는 것 보다 제가 조금
바꿔 적는게 더 좋을까요?
Good (24) 서론 -철자 오류들
세번째 본문 -수 일치 -this 두번 쓰셨습니다. -축약형 지양해주세요. didn't-->did not
결론 -수 일치
본문과 본문 사이 줄바꿈 반드시 해주세요. 철자 오류 신경 많이 써주세요.
질문에 대한 답으로, 본인이 문법 실수 없이 바꿔 적으실 수 있으면 바꿔 적는 것이 좋습니다. 하지만, 그렇지 않다면 본문의 표현을 그대로 쓰시는 것도 괜찮습니다. 바꾸는 것에 너무 집중하여 더 많은 오류를 내실 수 있습니다. 조금씩 바꿔 적는 연습을 하시면 좋습니다.
수고하셨습니다~~
■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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