▶ Your Answer : In recent days, high school students study major subjects in standardized tests (축약형 작성 X) day and night to enroll in famous universities. However, it is important to study courses that seems minor. With this understanding, I believe that it is important for high school students to take a basic economics. This is because it helps them to broaden interpersonal skills and enjoy a better quality of life.
Firstly, learning a basic economics enable students to broaden interpersonal skills. Understanding the relationship between forming connections with others and learning basic economics is important. Learning basic economics helps students to learn basic principles in economics. These principles help students to understand economic issues better. Also, recent people are greatly interested in economic events as these issues are closely related to accumulation or loss of their wealth. So, economic events help people to form common topics with each other. For example, I was greatly interested in economics in high school and participated in an after-school economics course. This was extremely useful for me to build interpersonal skills in later years in society. In one situation, I joyfully continued talking with my client who had his real estate price increased due to the construction of a new subway station near his land and before the meeting. As I was able to sympathize with him, I could form a connection with him. In this respect, it is important for high school students to take basic economics as it has an effect of building interpersonal skills.
Secondly, investing time studying a basic economics enables students to enjoy a better quality of life. Interestingly, a renowned social scientist in South Korea recently published an article in 'The Koran Herald' claiming that learning basic economics helps students to strengthen social competitiveness. According to the article, 62 percent of 200 Korean leading recruiters preferred people who have taken basic economics classes in their high school years or in university years. They show such tendency because they tend to solve problems occurring in corporations better than those who have never learned economics. Knowledges and skills learned in basic economics course affect job performances in a positive way because most problems happening in companies are related with economic issues. Candidates with basic knowledge on economics can not only predict how the economic issues will affect their corporations but also find suitable solutions to minimize bad ramifications. This not only results in job promotions but also ultimately encourages students to enjoy a better quality of life in the future. (Better quality of life라는 표현은 다소 모호하므로 "미래의 취업 역량을 쌓을 수 있는 기회를 제공한다" 등으로 변형해 사용해주세요)
To sum up, I believe that it is important for all high school students take basic economics class for tho following reasons; to broaden interpersonal skills and to enjoy a better quality of life. As a consequence, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated due to the reasons I have mentioned.
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