▶ Your Answer :
There are some disagreements over whether or not an effective leader
should have the ability to listen to other
opinions and incorporate them. Some people
believe that a leader should make the right
decisions that most people can acknowledge. However, in my opinion, an effective leader should be able to make decisions on his or her own.
(decide sometimes without including and hearing others ideas.) This is because sometimes there is not
enough time to discuss with other people. (reduced time to discuss.)
Moreover, the ability to make quick decisions is
one of the characteristics of a good leader. (a leader's ability to
decide is takes priority over other's that.)
To begin with, a leader cannot waste valuable time, (and even a
leader is able to take appropriate action rapidly. 이 부분은 무슨 뜻 인지 모르겠네요.) Every person has different opinions (and a wide variety of ideas)
on certain issues, which makes it difficult for a leader to make a decision in
a timely manner. This is due to the fact
that a leader should understand each person has different ideas and should be able to come up with one conclusion. (to
amalgamate into one conclusion.) A leader would continue to discuss to make
right decisions. For example, Franklin D Roosevelt
who was the president of the U.S, resolved
the stagnated economy. Most of the citizens in the
U.S suffered from recession. (the
exacerbated economy because they were hard to make some money to live.) Roosevelt
went the extra mile to solve the problem as fast as possible. Thus, Roosevelt
enacted the policy called New Deal policy on his own. Thanks
to his quick decision, people did not have to suffer from recession any longer.
(With the rapid his decision, the citizen suffered from the aggravated economy
could overcome and improve the quality of life.)
In addition, a leader is more intelligent than others. If members of
a certain group are not
as experienced or clever, (have less capability and experience,) it is unlikely that they will make the most effective
decision on their own. (the decision reflected by them is possible to be
wrong and be ineffective to solve a problem.) On
the contrary, there is a higher possibility
that the solution made by a talented person is more effective and
economical, which is because a leader has a wide range of knowledge and
experience (rather) than members. For instance, Margaret Thatcher as known as "Iron Lady" is famous for her leadership style. (associated
with her uncompromising polities and leadership style.) She solved the economic
problem that (caused the quality of life to be vitiated by forcing flexible
labor markets and reducing the power and influence of trade. 무슨 의미인지 정확히
이해가 가지 않습니다.) This was because she
believed in herself and her judgment. (her ability in connection with
the economy and she thought her ability was far more intelligent than others.) In the end, her decision was right and it helped revive
the economy. (helpful to overcome the worsen economy.)
Writing
Score (0-30): 20-21
Score
(0-5): 3.00-3.25
Grammar
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