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I disagree with this statement and I have two reasons to support my answer. (Too simple introduction) First, a students' performance on one test in an academic year is not a good measure of what they are learning in class. (Need to state relevance between students' performance and a teacher's salary) There are many other things that are involved as well. For example, many students prefer to go to tuitions and attending extra classes (What does it mean?) just because they think that it would help raise their grades. As a result, they can hardly concentrate on lecture in the classroom because they think the topic being covered would be covered in a more profound manner in the tuitions and that they'd be able to grasp more of what is being taught by the tuition personnel afterwards. (Wrong grammar sentence) This acts as an blockage for the teachers' efforts to teach in the classrooms. Furthermore, a large part of the academic performance rests solely on the student. A teacher can do only so much they can only help the students get good grades but afterwards it is all up to the students who determines whether he or she will get good grades. If a student develops an interest in the subject and puts his back into it to learn each and every concept, he or she's much more likely to succeed than others the student who does little to understand it mainly out of indolence or other distractions. Second, if such thing were to be employed, many teachers would actually resort to home tutoring primarily because they are more concerned about their salaries than the students' understanding of the subject. (Why do you mention "home tutoring?") In such a case, the situation descends into a tale of greediness and as a result, it is the students those who suffer is the students. Normally students spend about 6 hours in school. Employing such a policy would mean that the students would have no choice but to attend the extra tuitions even if that's not what they want but are forced to do so by their parents' hands. If, on an average, a student is made to attend 4 extra tuitions every day, each about an hour long, they would waste around good 4 to 5 hours which could have, otherwise, been very well utilized for other activities. Imagine the amount of pressure being put on the students' shoulders. Consequently, the sleep pattern is affected, the overall physical and mental health would get worse well being is stagnated and life becomes dull. In such a situation how can you expect a student to perform well in the exams? The plan ultimately backfires. Summing up, I disagree with the statement that says 'A teacher's earnings should be based on the students' performance.' because a student's performance on one test in an academic year is not a good measure of what they are learning in class and if such thing were to be employed, many teachers would actually resort to home tutoring primarily because they are more concerned about their salaries than the students' understanding of the subject.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 2 | Score | Limited 5-10 | - 문법이 완성형으로 서술되어 있지 않고, 동사, 전치사, 접속사등을 누락하고 서술한 형태가 많이 보이는 편이에요. - 의미를 해석하기 어렵고, 어떤 주장을 펼치고 있는지 명확히 파악하기 어렵습니다.
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