▶ Your Answer : Taking time for relaxation has been one of the most important issues in recent lives, because it has changed people's lives tremendously. From this understanding, I believe that Relaxing by doing physical exercise is important for two reasons. Firstly, it helps people to relieve stress and it enables people to broaden perspectives. Participating various physical activities to relax has been proven that it affects people's life cycle in positive ways. Unprecendentedly, recent people are enduring hectic life cycles. Every morning people have to patienty sit through traffic to get to work. Once they are at work, they have to stand countless documents and the numerous number of calls from cumtomers and they have to work to finish their daily assigned tasks even at home. Such exhausting life cycle wears down people. As a way to manage the enusing stress, people participate in various social clubs related to physical activities. These activities provides convenience for people to seek diversions to turn their focuses on new, and fresh challenges which they can enjoy. Even if it is only for a short time, it frees people's minds from intense mental pressure they get from their jobs and generate energy to get back to work with better efficiency. Recently, a renowned social scientist in South Korea published an article in a major newspaper, 'The Korean Herald.' According to the article, relaxing by doing phyiscal activities allows people to broaden their perspectives. Currently, today's professions are greatly subdivided not like before, it is hard for people to take interdisciplinary perspectives. People working in Wall streets only interact with accountants and take perspectives of the accountant. Teachers only deal with problems occur inside school. For the reason, people are tend to become narrow minded. However, by joining in social group sports clubs, people gain opportunities to broaden their perspectives. The professor added that, statistically, people who have been participating in sports clubs were more likely to understand and respect other people's views and ideas. Over 80 percent of people who are playing sports in the social clubs were prone to accept new perspectives and opinions. On the other hand, people who have never joined the social sports clubs only respected the opinion similar to their thoughts. Professor added that first groups showed such tendency dew to they had more chance to interact with people in different realms. To conclude, I believe that relaxing by doing phyiscal exercise is good for the following reasons : to relieve stress and to broaden perspectives. Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the reasons I have mentioned above.
2번째 이유 서술부분에 relaxation적인 부분이 아닌 그냥 운동 하면 좋은점을 썼는데 off topic 인가요? |