▶ Your Answer :
To build a large shopping center
in the neighborhood is the subject of
argumentation. Some people dislike and strongly oppose that plan. However, I
strongly support that with two reasons and I will explain those reasons in this
essay.
First of
all, if a big shopping center is constructed nearby, people’s lives will be (far)
much more comfortable. There are a lot of stores (conveniences) in a
shopping mall, such as (for example,)
clothes stores, cosmetic stores, grocery stores, restaurants and so on. If a
huge shopping mall is built in a town,
residents do not need to travel to somewhere for
shopping. (move other town for buying something.) Therefore, they can
save their time, money, and energy. For instance, Costco was built in my town 2
years ago, and it has been so convenient for me.
(my live is really advanced.) I can buy almost everything
(anything what) that I need without spending
a lot of time. My family and friends also find it very convenient.
(usually said that how convenience it is.)
Second, if a huge shopping mall
is nearby, (made in near place,) it is helpful for local businesses. (would be
increased rapidly.) There are a lot of people who visit a large shopping center,
despite the fact that it (the shopping center) is far from where they live. (distant from their
residential area.) The growth of population is absolutely helpful for the local
economy. (-economic.) For example, land
value will increase and transportation
services will be advanced. There is one study conducted by Seoul National
University in 2012 which demonstrated (have
shown) this phenomenon well. According to the research, 100% of cities
indicated increasing economic growth after a large shopping mall had been built in the area. (neighborhood.)
Especially, one city’s economy grew by (fully)
400%. (percentage.) Undoubtedly, this growth will be helpful for residents.
To sum up, there are two
advantages of large stores constructed in the neighborhood;
being comfortable, and improving local businesses.
For the two reasons mentioned above, I firmly support a large shopping center
built in my neighborhood.
Writing Score (0-30): 17-20
Score (0-5): 2.50-3.00
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