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In general, it is well known fact that
watching TV has several negative effects on people. However, television is the a
most popular mass media with low charge which can be a source of information.
Thus, I strongly believe there are a lot of advantages that television gives to us include to children. Firstly, television is in one of the quickest
and easiest methods to get various information. When we click the button on a
remote controller to turn on the TV, we can meet diverse instructive programs
ranging form news, animation, educational broadcasting, and even to documentary
channel. These programs provide a chance to have indirect experiences to
children. As the same way books do and articles do, TV gives us various
valuable lessons. In other words, TV offers an opportunity to learn more about
the world that we never have met before. As a case in point, when I was 7 years
old, every Sunday morning, I turned on the TV and tried to looking for a program
that is proper to me. In that age, I knew the truth that ‘sesame street’ is
definitely one of my style. (Explain what it is) By looking at the dolls in ‘sesame street’, I could
understand American breakfast, and how people in USA have different eye colors and different language with us in Korea.
Secondly, TV is one of the popular media
with low charge for high technology which provide enormous information of the
world. TV is invested the very long time ago, differ to mobile phone or desk
tops. Thanks to historical development of TV, it is exploited widely by modern
people, to make matters better, it provides us can make use of various educational channel for their studying and also at a reasonable price with
low price. When you register a math institute for your child, you should pay a considerable amount of money for that. Contrary to this, when you have found an
appropriate channel and program on TV, you can just let your child watch and study with the math teacher on TV,
without paying for the extra money for that program. For instance, when my sister
was in an elementary school. She was in love with television. She spent almost two hours every day watching watched historical
movies, and math teaching and program, science programs for 2hours for every day. And
she did well in her school. And graduated elementary school successfully and
she got to learn how to study and how to review. Now she is working in an
animal hospital as a vet. And she really loves television still now.
To sum up, TV is not a idiot box. This cheap and widespread media
provides reasonable way to learn and study. Also watching television is one of
the quickest and easiest way to learn more about other fresh new world for
children. For these reasons, I firmly believe that let children to watch TV is
a great way to study and learn more.
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