▶ Your Answer :
Undoubtedly, efforts play significant
roles in students’ daily lives in many of the places where they work or play. Some
people might think that it is more important to give students prizes or awards
for their efforts than results, while others do not. Both sides may have their own
reasons to support their views. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that
granting students prizes or awards for their efforts is more important than
evaluating grades. There are several reasons as follows.
To begin with, when students are given
prizes or awards for their efforts, it is more likely to bring about positive
results. Evaluating grades scares students by comparing results with friends,
being discouraged, and losing confidence. On the other hand, giving winnings or
rewards for their trying tends to drive motivation necessary for stellar
achievement, because prizes allow students to get many of the things they want,
including luxury items and the necessities of life. When students have
motivation, they are likely to bring a good result by having more energy to put
into studying and being passionate. For example, when my sister was in high
school, she had to do mathematics homework given by her homeroom teacher on a
daily basis. She had never done homework due to the fear of getting a bad
grade. Fortunately, she changed little by little after her teacher started to
give one dollar for student who tried homework. She saved money for buying a
smartphone she wants by doing mathematics homework every day. She realized that
her diligence for doing homework could help her save a lot of money by
improving her grades, while her laziness could negatively affect her. As a
result, she was able to see positive results she contributed to by winning a
mathematics contest. Many people around her started to respect her, allowing
her to be confident, optimistic and strong. Without the prizes, she would have
fallen behind.
All things considered, I strongly believe
that providing prizes or awards for students’ trying is more significant than
results for those reasons I have mentioned above. All in all, giving students
prizes or awards for their efforts cannot be overestimated in the pursuit of
success in life.
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