Some people may
think that to invade others’
lives is acceptable. However, In my case, it is not right to interfere with
others’ freedom since all people have to be assured their
privacy and we live with all together so It is important to keep others’ personal lives.
To begin with,
people have a right to be guaranteed their freedom. In fact, of course, you
should follow norms but unless the worst situation rises
such as hurting another other people’s body and properties all people have a
basic right (문장이 너무 기니 중간에 한 번 끊어주세요). For example, I will talk about my own experience
to illustrate this point. 3 years ago, when
I worked at a notorious firm as infringing
employees’ free time firm notorious for
infringing its employees’ free time. My boss occasionally called after
finishing work and even during weekends. He used to order some tasks. I could not relax in
my share spare time and I had to work
hard. I could not recovered my energy over the
weekend. So, I quitted my job and transferred to another
company. In contrast to my former boss, my new boss kept workers’ free time strictly. I felt that I
could regain energy and strengthen my health when I rested for an enough time.
On the top of that, in this world we never are
able to live alone. To be specific, nowadays It
is more necessary to inhabit live in
harmony with others so if someone breaks others’
private area and life, there will be conflict between
others. So, we must act politely even in close
relationships of close, For instance,
there was a survey conducted by The Korean of Department of Education in 2010,
with 200 university students as respondents to understand whether that behaving gently could affect the
level of relationship or not. What they found was intriguing. The majority of
respondents replied that they usually stayed in a
good relationship with people who were not rude and respected other’s personal life. This poll proved
that it is a basic element in great relationship.
To sum up, to intrude people’s liberty should not be accepted and to
maintain another people’s right should be
protected. In this regard, I firmly believe that to disrupt people’s freedom is wrong.