■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : 리더십은 학습될 수 있는가? |
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▶ Your Answer :
The
given topic is whether leadership is a born gift. Some people might feel that
leadership is innate gift, but I firmly believe that people can learn to be a
leader by variety experiences. There are two compelling reasoning which I will
explore in the following essay.
First of all, people can learn
responsibility and communication skills by participating sports activity, and
those abilities are fundamental of developing leadership. To be specific,
sports activity needs communicating with other players for winning the game or
accomplishing the goal. For instance, one of my friends felt uncomfortable to
speak with others when she was middle school students, but after she joined in
school soccer team, she learned how to assert her own opinion and discuss with
other players from soccer team activity. If it had not been for the precious
experience, she might not have been able to learn communication skills. Not
only communication skill, it shows outstanding effectiveness in improving
responsibility because, after game end, people should accept the result even
though they were loose. Accepting sports game results can be difficult at the
first time, but after several experiences, most people willingly accept the
results and get responsibility about that.
Moreover, visiting different culture and
meeting foreign people is a helpful way of enhancing insight for improving
leadership since people can have more abundant experiences about accept
different culture or view point. According to recent study conducted by the
world top-tier university, people who have more traveling experiences shows
greater leadership than the others. By travelling, they learned how to accept peculiar
culture and understand the background of the others. It is necessary ability to
be a leader. People can maintain this ability by visiting or travelling various
places. Therefore, leadership can be improved by traveling experiences.
To sum up, I believe that my explanations
above sufficiently prove the reasonings of leadership can be educated. People
can learn leadership by participating sports activity and visiting unusual
places.
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처음으로 독립형 써봤어요,
시험이 얼마 안남아서 벼락치기로 하고 있는 중인데 예상점수 써주시면 너무 도움이 될 것 같습니다.
첨삭 정말 감사드립니다.