■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : With the help of the internet, students can learn more effectively. Agree or disagree? |
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▶ Your Answer : I agree.
In today’s perspective,
it is a time-consuming process to find information through a bunch of books in
library. Since there is a small library which has a variety range of knowledge
in your pocket, the smart phone. By using smart phone, you can take a online
course whenever you want to and even you can be a multilingual person. Then,
what makes it a truly smart thing to help us? Without the Internet, it would be
just an expensive phone call machine.
The first advantage
of having the Internet on your hands is that you do not have to go to lecture room.
With the expensive tuition of university, students in financial difficulty often
have to work part-time job or even two jobs. They can work on weekend but the
payment would be low. Therefore, working during weekdays is mandatory for them
to make ends meet. However, (대소문자 구분) it is hard to adjust the schedule between classes
and their work-time. There are some night courses in universities, they often
get closed until 10:00pm. Thus, taking online courses would not only give students
flexible useful chances but also allow them to both pursuit of studying and earning
money.
Secondly, to appropriately
learn other language, you must go to the country which uses the language. It
was a common sense until several years ago. Now, however, you could even be a
Korean, Japanese, Turkish in your own country by using the Internet. There are
a lot of tips and daily-life conversation skills in Youtube which are virtually
free for everyone in the globe. Inspired by talking with American soldier, when
I was in army, I made a decision that I have to go to the United States and
study in there but there was a critical problem with me. I had studied English for nine (아라비아 숫자 지양해주시고 띄어쓰기 주의해주세요) years at that time but I was not familiar with English so that I had to learn
about it, at least in understanding the conversation of English speakers daily speaking.
After struggling with a bunch of textbooks, I was still a toddler, which means that
I had to find some another route to learn. What I found was that Youtube is an
absolutely great method to get along with foreign languages. By using Youtube ,
an Internet based application, I could change my pronunciation and get some
words that native English speakers use in their everyday life and I had never
met in textbook. I have learned English about 10 years but the Internet helped
me to study in United States relatively faster than textbooks.
To sum up, you can
do anything with this amazing worldwide library. I strongly believe that the
Internet is the most effective channel to make students fulfill their goals. |
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완전한 off-topic입니다.
smartphone에 대한 에세이도 아니며, language에 관한 에세이도 아닙니다.
순수하게 인터넷의 장점만 적으시면 됩니다. (ex. 정보가 많다, 언제 어디서든 접속할 수 있다)
지금 첫 문단은 스마트폰의 장점이고
두번째 문단은 language 공부에 좋다 (하지만 youtube의 비중이 더 큼) 는 식으로 흘러갑니다.
전체적인 방향을 다시한번 수정해주시기바랍니다.
(인터넷이 주가 되게)
수고하셨습니다. *^^*