■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : To become a leader or a politician, communication skill is important AG/DIS |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people might say that other abilities such as economic or political power is important to become a leader or a politician. However, in my opinion, communication skill is the most essential competence of chief. The first reason is that communication skill is considered as the best virtue of politician. The second reason is that active communication and discussion are very helpful to address lots of troubles.
To begin with, most people think that communication ability is the most important qualifications for leaders. Unlike the past, almost all people want to communicate more flexible and favorable person who like to talk with each other. In the past, there are a significance amount of conflicts between leaders and citizens because of absence of communication. To solve these problems, many folks have changed their thoughts.
For example, Mr. Park who was a leader in Korea before quitted the president. This is because he didn't take any actions when huge ship sinking into sea. In results, lots of people died when the catastrophe happened. After that, communication skill is regarded as very necessary virtue to politicians and a myriad of citizens also has changed their attitudes.
On top of that, interactive communication is much more helpful to solve diverse problems. To be specific, communication means that many participants give and take their own opinions each other. So it is useful for them to get solutions through not a single idea but a variety of ideas. For instance, last semester, I took two classes. One was with team-project, and another was without that. Of course, the former one was more busier for me than the latter one. I had to do lots of assignment and have meetings. But I realized that we could find excellent suggestion from diverse opinions and active discussions. As a result, I got a great score and more satisfied with the class with project. Therefore I can identify that communication is effective to solve some troubles.
To sum up, leaders should develop communication skill to interact their citizens. It makes them participate in their political process more. In this regard, communication skill is important to become a leader or a politician. |
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시간을 확실히 재진 않았는데 30분 살짝 초과한 것 같습니다. 아닌가.. 모르겠네요
템플릿은 글 구조에 해당하는 접속사만 살짝살짝 참고하고 나머지는 제 머릿속에서 다 짜냈는데 어떻게 나오긴 하네요 ㅠㅠㅠ
paraphrasing이 잘 안 된 것 같은데... 잘 봐주시기 바랍니당. ㅠㅠㅠ