Some people think that a job that gives people a higher salary and not
much free time is better. However I think a job that gives people lots of
vacation time is better for two reasons. This is because spending vacation time
enables people to relieve stress and enjoy a better quality of life.
First of all, spending
vacation time enables people to relieve stress. Understanding, the daily environment of people and the potential
role of vacation time is necessary to substantiate my view. Every morning, once, they are at their
company, they have to endure a countless documents and continue to read more even at home. Such exhausting routine
repeats itself and eventually wears down people. As a way to manage the ensuing
this stress, people can spend vacation time with peers. Compared to a
job that gives people a higher salary and not much free time, even if it is a
short time, this frees their minds from the intense mental pressure from work.
In this regard, I believe that spending vacation time promotes people to
relieve stress. (comma를 넣지 않아야 하는 상황에 comma를 넣으셨으니 주의하시길
바래요)
Second, spending vacation
time allows people to enjoy a better quality of life. Interestingly, a renowned
social scientist in South Korea published an article in “The Korean Herald”
last Tuesday which claims that spending vacation time promotes people to
strengthen relationships with their families. The article claims that 62
percent of 200 Korean people believe spending vacation time provides meaningful
opportunities for people who are struggling to connect with their families.
Essentially, spending vacation time promotes social activities that encourage
people to openly interact and freely exchange their views and ideas with one
another. Such intercommunications build a platform not only to cooperate with
families but also create lasting memories, allowing people to become more
socially aware and ultimately enjoy a better quality of life.
To
sum up, I believe that a job that gives people lots of vacation time is better
than a job that gives people a higher salary and not much free time for
following reasons: to relieve stress and enjoy a better quality of life.
Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the
reasons I have mentioned above.