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In this set of issues, both the reading passage and the speaker discuss several aspects of whether the hammerhead shark has some evolutionary benefits because of its unusually shaped head. The speaker argues that the assertions made in the reading passage are just wrong by casting doubts on the reading passage's claim that its unique shape of head is helpful to its survival.
To begin with, in the response to the reading, the speaker insists that the shape of shark's head does not improve its vision overall. Specifically explaining, sharks have good vision only when they view distant object. However, they need to see what is in front of them directly to catch its prey. This contradicts the reading passage's argument that the special shape of the shark's head makes its vision good. On top of that, the speaker challenges the reading passage by stating that different kind of sharks can smell as well; it is not a special ability that only hammerhead shark has. No scientific studies prove that hammerhead's unique head shape enhances its sense of smell. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that its special shape improve its sense of smell. Finally, the speaker contents the reading by saying that its unique structure does not make it to turn quickly. This is because sharks do not use their head for steering. In details, they can turn quickly because of its flexible backbone. This opposes the reading passage's argument that its unique head shape make its turning fast. In conclusion, the speaker challenges the explanation from the reading on account of reasons stated above.
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