▶ Your Answer : Various opinions may exist over the argument whether people nowadays are much healthier than those who in the past. As far as I am concerned, I am in complete agreement of the argument. This is because people get healthier through improved medication and accessibility to the information. First of all, nowadays it is easy to cure diseases. In the past, disease means death. To elaborate in detail, if people unfortunately go through the disease, people end up dying. However, many researches and experienced are studied, most of the disease can be cured by correct solutions. A research conducted by a renowned professor named Paul Kim from Yonsei university indicates that the death rate is dramatically decreasing from the moment since the modern medication is developed. To be specific, the most fatal disease in 1940’s is the cold which is now easily overcome. In addition, people can gain information about health so easily. After the internet is provided, people can search for the information. Lack of information and wrong information make healthy be deteriorated. Through internet, we can find appropriate information like what is better for particular disease or what this symptoms means. For example, my uncle suffered from cancer. A doctor who treated him said that it is difficult to overcome this disaster and he had to prepare for the bad consequences. However, my uncle was not didn’t discouraged, he gathered the information from Internet and books that mentions what is good for curing cancer. He learned that the red vegetables like tomatoes and chilli are good for preventing cancer from spreading in the body. He ate that food with regular exercise and finally he is now very healthy. With these convincing explanations I mentioned, I think the modern society is much healthier than the past.
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