▶ Your Answer :
People’s intellectual, social and personal
development are highly influenced by their achievement. With this
understanding, I believe that achieving success is more important than
remaining happy and optimistic when you fail. This is because people can feel a
sense of achievement when they achieve success on the life, which makes people
to relieve stress and enjoy a better quality of life.
Firstly,
achieving success enables people to relieve stress. Understanding the daily
environment of people and the potential role of the sense of achievement is
necessary to substantiate this view. For instance, many people have to
patiently sit through traffic to get to work. Once they are at work, they have to
endure countless documents and continue read more even at home. Such exhausting
their daily routine repeats itself and eventually wears down people. As a way
to managing the ensuing stress, people can feel a sense of achievement about
their works, which results in having positive motivation about their next
tasks. Even if it is only for a short time, this frees their mind from the
intense mental pressure from work. In contrast, remaining happy and optimistic when
you fail is too much hard since the stress can damage to people’s mental
condition. In this regard, I argue that achieving success allows people to
relieve stress.
Secondly,
achieving success enables people to enjoy a better quality of life.
Interestingly, a renowned social scientist in South Korea published an article
in “The Korean Herald” last Tuesday which claims that achieving success enables
people to strengthen competitiveness in society rather than remaining happy and
optimistic when people fail. The article argues that the 83 percent of 200
Korean leading recruiters prefer people who have experience of achieving success
in their works. The recruiter shows a such tendency because they tend to be
more progressive and effective. In the long run, progressive attitude and
effectivity on their works enhance their work performance. This is because their
progressive attitude by experience of achieving success can stimulate their ambitions
on work achievement and they know how to efficiently achieve successful works.
Therefore, these things result in job promotion and ultimately help people to
enjoy a better quality of life. I thought this report because the result of the
survey resonated with my thoughts.
To
sum up, I believe that it is more important for people to achieve success
rather than remain happy and optimistic when people fail for the following
reasons: strengthening competitiveness in society and enjoying a better quality
of life. Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for
the reasons I have mentioned above.
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