▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage there is ample support for the author’s claim that coal will constantly be used as a fuel in the future because using of coal has have several advantages. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author’s point. First, the professor contends that coal mining method is a complex process. No more coal does not exists near by surface of the earth, so miners have to dig about 100m from ground to gain coal. It needs high technology to deeply mine the coal. This casts doubt on the passage’s claim that coal mining is easy thanks to the strip mining which is the most easily digging method. Second, the professor insists that shipping coal is more expensive than other resources. To transfer coal dug to a power plant, it requires a lot of trips of transportations. This counters the passages’s assertion that whereas other types of resources should spend lots of money in guarantee of safety, coal does not need to do it, so it is cheap to transfer. Finally, the professor refutes that it is not true that the coal industry makes more jobs for workers. The industry employs less labor to lower cost. On the top of that, because improving process requires no more workers, people might begin to lose s their jobs in the related work field. This refutes the passage’s suggestion that if the industry is fostered more workers would be hired;, therefore many of jobs will be generated by the industry.
Good (24–25) 서론 -using 이 주어이므로 동사가 단수여야 합니다.
첫번째 본문 -no more 이 부정이므로 does not을 뒤에 붙이면 이중 부정입니다. -nearby로 써주세요. -단/복수 주어/명사에 따른 동사 변화 연습해주세요. 세번째 본문 -loss는 명사형입니다. 동사는 lose입니다. -,therefore로 문장과 문장 이을 수 없습니다. ; therefore, 로 해주세요. 전체적으로 쉼표의 적절한 사용 연습해주세요. 단/복수 동사도 연습해주세요.
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