▶ Your Answer :
It is controversial whether people
endure their anger in order to get along with other people in competitive
society. In this regard, I believe that being patient is not a good way to
live. This is because being patient makes us suffer from mentally illness and
lose way to fix one’s flaw.
To begin with, I think that people need
to lose their temper sometimes. To be specific, if one’s anger is off
the limit, he or she can suffer illness of mind. For instance, especially in
Korea, there are so many people suffer from mental illness called temper
disease. It normally occurs in Korean society as Korean tend to endure their
anger until they cannot endure it. It is similar to depression that might
result in ruining one’s life. The most effective way to prevent it and cure it
is to emit one’s anger in proper time and way. Thus, I believe that people shouldn’t hold
back their anger sometimes to be healthy.
Moreover, as people tend to think that
what they are doing is the best and right, we need to teach them what is right or
wrong by criticizing them. To be specific,
somebody might say that we shouldn’t be angry but patient and kind when we
point out someone’s flaw. I can understand why they are saying like that. Because when we criticize other people, relationship of each other can be broken. However, people don’t take into consideration if
they hear about it in kind way. So, I think that we should know how to tell and lose temper
wisely to give a lesson to people. For example, when I was doing group works in
my school, my team leader blamed me because I had a poor teamwork. He said me
that I need to get along with other members and share what I am thinking. He
was right. I was sad then as I think that I am poor person. But his sentences
changed me and now, I am look up to him. Therefore, I think healthy blame and
anger are sometimes needed.
To sum up, I strongly believe that being
patient is not always good way to live in modern society for the following
reasons: to be mentally healthy and being a better person by accepting blame.
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