▶ Your Answer :
1. allow students to prepare for their future
2. studunet can forster their experties
There are some people who believe that
univerity professors should concentrate on researching rather than teaching
their knowledge to students. However, in my opinion, I personally think that concerning their status, 'educator',
improving their thier pupils is important more than anything else for the subsequent
reasons. First, student can earn valuable lesson from professors' lecture.
Second, they are able to develop an understanding of their specific major.
First of all, professors' priceless lectures
play a significant role in college students' life. Generally speaking, college
stage is the most important stage in students' life. Therefore, professor's
dedicated effort about their lecture is conducive to fot college students to judge
whether to choose their major as a future job. My personal anecdote shows the
importance of lecture rather than research. When I was a senior in college, I
was considerablly motivated by well-designed lecture. My professor handed out a
lot of materials from basic reference to in-depth thesies which made me easier
to understand the field of my major. To be^specific spesicif, I could imagine g what to
specify my professional area and how to organize my strong point. Not only I,
but all of my peers could be motivated to pursue their major by listening to the
lectures. The whole understanding of lecture allowed my classmates to be
equipped with a wide range of knowledge related to my major. Come to think of
it, I could experience diverse research and other job study after getting a job.
However, almost every fundamental knowledge was shaped at my college period. Consequently,
my professor significantly had an influence on deciding my own career because
he alwalys tried to give a variety of information about realistic information of
career. If my professor only had payed attention to his reseach or study, I
would have not found my professional path. There is no question that a wide
range of knowledge and advice motivated me to do my best at the college stage
and have confidence on choosing my careers.
On top of that, if professors prioritize
educating their students, this helps students to prepare the competitive job
market. These days, it is much harder to get a job upon graduation. Under this
difficult condition, it is a necessity for job seekers to be equipped with
basic knowledge of their major. There is a poll which shows the importance of
students' knowledge when they want to get better jobs. The purpose of the
survey was to confirm general tendency at the job market. The survey was
conducted by the National Association of Employment as respondents in diverse
fields. The majority of respondents stated that the quality of college
lecture decides an adequate grasp of their thier majors. Additionally, their
sufficient understanding of major could give positive impression to employee at
job interviews. Concerning this circumstance, students can earn diverse
advantages from well-designed lecture. On the other hand, when professors focus
on study rather than educating students, it is difficult to grant basic
knowledge even though they could teach some experience. Basically, the harder the
professors teach, the greater expertise their students will have, thus making
their students rewarding.
To sum up, professors' teaching thier students studnets
have more advantages than performing professor's own researches for the reasons
mentioned mentionaed above. Instructing their pupils encourages them to understand their
major and makes students into competitive candidates in the job market. For
these reasons, it is better for university professors to concentrate on
teaching their students than studying their fields only.
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