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An intriguing topic in discussion at hand is that which source is more important to gain knowledge; from experience or from books. Although it may seem true that knowledge gained from books is more important, there appears to be too much absurdity to argue that way. Although many people hold different ideas and opinions, I believe it is more important to gain knowledge from experience on account of following two reasons: ultimate reason for gaining knowledge is to use in real world and sometimes people easily get bored of reading books and give up gaining knowledge.
To begin with, It is important to keep in mind that the ultimate reason for gaining knowledge is to use in real world. Concerning the reason, wouldn't it be more reasonable to gain knowledge from experience? Learning from experience would be more effective to use in real world. For example, usually it is not easy to practice exactly the same way in the world the knowledge learned form the books. However, when the knowledge is gained from experience, one can directly use it in real world when the same situation happens. People who gain knowledge from books have to practice again in similar situation to use the knowledge in the real world. It is inefficient to practice twice: gain knowledge from books and practice again in similar situation. Thus, it is more efficient and reasonable to gain knowledge from the experience.
On top of that, gaining knowledge by reading books can be boresome and lead people to give up learning. However, learning from experience requires interactive activities, so it leads people to gain knowledge continuously. To be specific, knowledge from books are nothing but things mostly gained by someone else so they feel that they are just absorbing someone's knowledge. On the other hand, when people are learning knowledge from experience, they feel like they are actually doing something to gain knowledge and lead them to behave more actively and interact with other people and environments.Through this way, learning through experience, people feel the process of gaining knowledge is more enjoyable and fun, so they will continuously engage in gaining knowledge.
To sum up, I believe that gaining knowledge by experience is more important. Because people can use their knowledge directly in the real world and they can enjoy the learning process, in itself.
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