Some people think that teachers’ performance need to be assessed by other teachers. However, in my opinion, students should evaluate teachers for two reasons. First of all, students can assessed them accurately than other teachers do. In addition, it is not unfair to make other teachers evaluate them.
To begin with, students always take teachers’ classes so they know well about their abilities, such as how they teach students usually. With evaluations by students, teachers can be aware of their drawbacks and will make a strong attempt to improve their disadvantages. Thus, it is possible for students to have finer lectures than in the past. For example, according to the survey conducted by UCLA’s research department, about 80 percent of participants who were students reported that they came to take more useful classes after they assessed their teachers. They also mentioned that the reason for this change was efforts of teachers who tried to develop their lecture styles.
On top of that, allowing other teachers to evaluate is unjust. Estimations of performances is really crucial for schools since they are deeply related with schools’ prestige. They are also important to teachers. This is because, if they got low scores from evaluations, they are likely to be fired from schools. To avoid this situation, teachers intentionally give high scores each other. This makes it impossible for schools to know teachers’ real capacities. Thus, assessments made by students can prevent these corruptions in advance. For instance, when I was in high school, many students were allowed to estimate each other and they deliberately gave high scores. However, the school did not know about this circumstance and its fame was gotten worse gradually. Consequently, evaluations by other teachers are not helpful for schools either.
To sum up, students can make accurate assessment and schools can prevent unjust situations in advance. In this regard, I believe that students should estimate teachers’ abilities.
Good (24–30)
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