▶ Your Answer :
Some people might say that it is good idea
to start working on a presentation as soon as it is assigned. However, I
personally believe that waiting until they have the perfect idea for it is
better idea for me. There are two reasons. First, second methods could help me
to more accomplishing presentations. Next, doing as soon as it is assigned is
waste of time.
To begin with, the statement that
thoroughly preparing presentation is only way to success is right. There are so
many things to complete perfect prefect presentation. Therefore, it is undeniable that
as you think more and do my best, the presentation's quality gets better. For
instance, I will talk about me and my friend, Jane, to elucidate my point. In the
case of me, I always spent so many times to finish preparing presentation. Unlike
Dislike me, my friend did her his assignments quickly and never looked again her
assignments after she finished them. When it was final presentation of that
semester that was very important for me and Jane, I could get good grade by
showing my results with much of endeavor. But, she got poor result because her
presentation was terrible. Since lacked of effort, she could not cover embarrassing
situations. This shows that the only way to make good presentation is doing my
best in any case.
On the top of that, using prototype idea
for presentation is not good way to use of time. If you notice your ideas have
weakness after time passes by, fixing ideas and presentation takes more time
than thinking thoroughly by once. For example, a study was conducted by a group
of education majors to determine whether preparing time could affect grade of
students' presentations. There were two groups existed. The first group was
formed of students who used so many times for doing their assignments. The
second group was consisted of students who prepared their presentations as soon
as it was assigned. After the presentations, the researchers concluded that
first group got better evaluation than second group. In the following
interview, teachers who evaluated students' presentation said that first
group's assignment was much completive than the others. This study demonstrates
that preparing is important to perfect presentation.
To sum up, I strongly believe that waiting
and thinking more until perfect ideas are come up is the best method to great
presentation.
Good (24–26)
첫번째 본문 -철자 오류 perfect -will 조동사 필요 -dislike: hate unlike가 적절한 표현입니다. -lack of effort -파란 부분 약간 맞지 않습니다. doing my best와 토픽과 연결이 많이 되지 않습니다. 본인이 본문에서 연결을 시켜주지 않는 이상 동떨어진 느낌이 듭니다.
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