It is
evident that the parents’
role is critical for their children in general. In has been widely debated
whether it is crucial to have strict rules set
for their children in order for them to achieve success
to a success. Some people might contends
that the strict rules can cause in negative way negative
effects for juveniles. In my opinion, however, I firmly believe that
parents should set strict rules for their children. There are two compelling
reasons for my argument.
First,
children in juvenile stages are more likely to be affected from their
surroundings and circumstances. The school is one of the critical impact environments for children. A lot of students are
changing during this time period in which they are
going to school. They are more likely to be exposed to a danger.
In order to avoid their children from this situation, the parents should set
some strict rules. To give you an idea, I would like to describe the article I
read during the society class. In the article, some researchers did a research about the impact of the strict
rules. They asked some parents about their education style and looked up on their children's level and adjustment. As I
expected, children who had a higher and stricter
education style did well in their school. This study demonstrates that the
strict rules can made make children more
succeed. (왜 엄한 규칙들이 높은 성적을 이끄는 지에 대한 설명이 더 필요합니다.)
Second,
the strict rules will the guide proper way
for the children. In general, most parents are worrying worried that their children about going might go the wrong way. The parents may have strict
rules at first. However, they would not keep that those rules forever. They will would release their children from the strict rules as
they grow. For example, I would like to talk about my friend's experience. She
had a indeed extremely strict parents. Even though she was tired of that the strict rules, she could not reject it them. She always complained about the rules. However, these rules led her to succeed in her life.
She went to a great university as a result.
In conclusion, these all
two reasons I have mentioned above are the reasons
for my assertion about in order to succeed the on
why strict rules are necessary for children to
succeed.