▶ Your Answer :
Nowadays, there are so many channels to get a variety of information to do
research. But I disagree that using the printed materials such as books and articles in research is better compared with the Internet. This is because
the accessibility of Internet without any restraints has lessened our efforts
to get a wide range of information to do research. Furthermore, with the aid of
various functions of the Internet, such as
editing, copying and sharing with others, we can use the acquired information
freely to do research.
First, if we
use the internet to do research and write a thesis paper, we could broad our
range of research. To be specific, in contrast, when we are trying to do
research of some specific subject with the aid of books and articles, we could
not search lost material and find some beneficial data. Compared to this, when
we use the Internet, we could find the specific old documents and a variety of
international journals as well. To put if
frankly, when I was a in graduate school,
I could not wrote write the professional
thesis without the Internet searching. After I decided on my thesis title, I had to find and summary of
one summarize, but I had a difficulty only
with only the books and articles in the library. So I used the an internet site that helps to find all kinds of
international journal and thesis and articles. Without the Internet, I could
not have would not have been able to finish finished
my job with success.
Second, I enjoy
utilizing some practical functions on the Internet. There are so many kinds of
functions that help us to use materials efficiently. After we get some
information through the Internet, we had to summary had to summarize and organize the information to use
in research. My experience shows this concept clearly. When I worked as an
administrator in my company, I was asked to join in the research group
and I had to develop some program and prove the efficiency of it. I was alarmed
at first but sooner or later soon enough,
I decided to use the Internet and opened the group discussion room on the
Internet. With the use of many kinds of functions such as editing and sharing
on the Internet, we could use some beneficial materials and improvement on the
Internet.
In conclusion, I strongly insist that using the
Internet to do research is more useful than printed materials. This is because
doing research with the aid of Internet is helpful to research all kinds of
materials without restrains and allowed allows
us to utilize the various functions on the Internet, and it results in the
successful research.
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
Good (24-30) |
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26 |
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