▶ Your Answer :
토플액츄얼라이팅 3-1
The topic of the reading and lecture is both
about Anasazi civilization migration. The author of the reading believes that
the Anasazi civilization disappeared due to years of drought. The lecture casts
doubt on the author’s claims made in the article. He believes that drought has
nothing to do with migration of Anasazi civilization.
First of all, the author points out that
bones found in the graveyard in the civilization showed signs of malnutrition.
The article notes that in serious drought the amount of rainfall declines and
crops do not grow sufficient enough to provide proper nutrition to people, thus
causing malnutrition. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He says that
malnutrition was common among people regardless of drought. He argues that
about 45% of the Anasazi people suffered malnutrition and this is because most
of the foods were sent to religious elite.
Secondly, the author of the reading
mentions condition of the settlements shows showing their response to a drought. The
article states that people blocked granaries and entrance of the village in
plan to come back later when the drought is over. The lecturer rebuts this
statement. He says that it is not supporting evidence of the hypothesis that
people left because of drought. He argues that if it was true that the people
left the town in drought, they would have gone back to their town. However, it
is clear that they did not.
Finally, the author contends that after
leaving their settlements, the Anasazi resettled in places with abundant water
supplies and more rain fall. The article establishes that their resettlement in
those locations prove that they left their old town in order to evade drought. The lecturer, on the
other had, posits that the Anasazis also settled in areas without water. He
elaborates on this by providing an example of their settlement in Arizona where
the land was elevated and had little moisture. Good:24~30 점수: 28 통합형 에세이에서 가장 적합한 에세이인 거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 크게 보는 것 은 얼마나 적절하게 리딩과 리스닝을 비교하였나 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 이러한 면에서 아주 잘 보여지고 있습니다. 충분하게 리딩과 리스닝의 정보들이 들어간 거 같습니다. 그리고 evade drought라는 표현은 맞는 표현입니다. 문법적 오류도 없고 잘 서술하였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
-> 여기서 evade drought이 말이 되는 표현인가요?? 가뭄을 피한다라는 뜻으로요
|